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A Rainbow's End
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A Rainbow's End |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Once ... in a valley of interests peaked, moment's unrest ... a smile creeked Twice ... raised a question my dream'in fare are we, or naught ... in lov'in care Thrice ... came an echo "it is for real" the sun has shown ... its warmth we feel Now ... such sun has gone, it's disappeared a rainbow's end ... the rains we've feared "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Wait a minute...isn't there something magical at the end of the rainbow...keep looking you never know the treasure hidden there...Great writing... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
that magical treasure would be never ending sweet lady, however these rains of late seem unrevealing to such a sun's warming ways. perhaps a little pixie dust and your touch could ward off such fearing storms. thanks for the thoughts |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Craig...yes, the rains have not been kind recently... perhaps soon they shall abate and that rainbow will appear once again.. Just as you have, here on the blue. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
bringing the rain bringing the sun nice to see you in shades of blue again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the rain, but understand the moment when enough is enough, if not too much.  welcome home |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's about time you got back here! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes the rainbow remains long after the rain  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree. A very magical write! Good one. JL |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The best rainbow are those that never stop shining ... that I so agree! Thanks for the Hoot!! Thanks everyone for the warm welcome home, I've missed these blues! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a real story here! Great write.  ....jo |
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