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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Lovers Rendezvous Wet touches familiar face silently like tiny tears Thoughts formed in a magic place bring to mind forgotten years Soft grass bends beneath bare feet walking in this forest glen Running deer escape so fleet baby foxes seek their den As gentle winds kiss green leaves mind remembers song caress In her soul she still believes a gift from the heart does bless Shadow walks ahead, unclear parting walls of cloud that’s formed Shines on ageless face, so dear in a mist of love transformed Time does not burn off what was a fantasy woven true As birds sing and when bees buzz the lost lovers rendezvous Karen Mc Neil Startime |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As you would say...and have, many many times before....BRAVO! Well done Karen, I knew you still had the touch... Great write.... OK Soleil....are ya happy now....?? |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hmmm ... soft as barefeet on grass!!  there's a treat by itself always good to read you |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen Your words of love and romance always leave me floating on air. This was so very beautiful. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...one of my favorites...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome rhyme scheme! wonderful theme! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Time does not burn off what was a fantasy woven true As birds sing and when bees buzz the lost lovers rendezvous I loved this...bringing hope to many hearts with a softness of understanding..lovely |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, that was absolutely lovely! My goodness, how I enjoyed reading this touching and romantic poem! Beautifully expressed, Dear Time With the Stars.   EA  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanking you for sharing this one, Karen, as it buzzed me with a delicious memory. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen "Shadow walks ahead, unclear parting walls of cloud that’s formed Shines on ageless face, so dear in a mist of love transformed" Beautiful in thought and flow! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful song, Karen... I enjoyed the quiet peace of it. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this has a way about it, very nice |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Ageless, as fantasies are meant to be. -glider- |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really nice, Karen. Enjoyed! ....jo |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
I have just read quite a few of yours This one touches something thankyou Live It |
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