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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-08-19 10:31 AM

Traveled quietly, readjusting my thoughts
to an incomplete day, wishing it not to end.
Surrendering only to the whys that I cannot answer,
longing for the strength that the sun has
to rise every morning despite the gloom set before.

Uncertainty has become a way of life,
not able to estimate or perceive from true value,
limiting chance taking to a minimum.

Somewhere there is promise, where feelings
are free to flow and cover me in comfort
allowing me to believe again.

I lack the power over my fears, dressing in black
to minimize my notice, wishing to dance closely
in the moonlight where all becomes equal
under the stars.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-08-19 10:33 AM

And dance you shall sweet lady...
you are much stronger than you may realize at times..
but then again...I KNOW you are strong.
And so do you.

HUGS

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-08-19 12:41 PM

I'm with Donna

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-08-19 02:28 PM

hugs Ms M....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-08-19 02:32 PM

"dressing in black
to minimize my notice"

yep.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

5 posted 2004-08-21 09:55 AM

very sad but sweet poem, nicely expressed...I could definitely appreciate and feel the words because they seemed to describe me. thank you for sharing.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2004-08-21 10:22 AM

I wear alot of black (two funerals in the past two weeks notwithstanding).

"...wishing to dance closely
in the moonlight where all becomes equal
under the stars."

Lovely words, Maureen.

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