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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-08-19 06:45 AM

Oh...be still my heart (she sighs in weakendness)

Twitch and snort
Shedding light on my sleeve
With a cordial world and
A beacon of trees
Strings to quiz
Sampling figs
Leaning signs of singing peepers
Scooping fence rows
Delighted cleavage
Happy toes
Pressed to my breast
Oh for acts of kindness
Cradled in my arms
Where would one be without them?
Tickling chins of stars
Afternoon, introducing a crown to sun
Reading books with bare feet
Dense pinewoods, moving
To a place of unspoiled passage
Making smooth buttermilk
Before the hour of dawn
Hooking expressions
Clinging to blinking eyes
Oh Sweet Darlin, your a pleasant surprise
Dumbfounded, smattering of tiffany lights
Beating pulses with all their might
Dabbing wakefulness
Rolled up into deep cuffs
Offering notes precisely suggesting
Trusted shapes of open confessions
Oneness there hissing sweet silence

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-08-19 11:48 AM

Oh for acts of kindness
Cradled in my arms
Where would one be without them?

Amen! *S* I enjoyed this very much, Lee! *S*

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-08-19 11:59 AM

LeeJ

"Oh Sweet Darlin, your a pleasant surprise
Dumbfounded, smattering of tiffany lights"

I think you just described your poetry!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-08-19 12:25 PM

your words inspire

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-08-19 07:36 PM

Enjoyed...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-08-19 07:51 PM

Exceptional, passionate and so beautifully
wrapped within the strokes of your pen.
Nicely done, Lee...

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2004-08-19 07:55 PM

Words that sing a beautiful life...Magnificent...

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2004-08-19 09:30 PM

LJ
Warm and real, lovely...

Love this, especially the word "weakendness"....

"Leaning signs of singing peepers
Scooping fence rows
Delighted cleavage
Happy toes
Pressed to my breast"
and...
"Oneness there hissing sweet silence"

oneness, yes ...in a childlike coma of sleep.
Excellent....
--------ice
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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2004-08-20 05:48 PM

Beautiful write Lee J!!

JL

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2004-08-20 09:08 PM

Lee, this is so beautiful. You really do
paint pictures with your words.
Hugs,
Ethel

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