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Here, There
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Here, There It doesn’t really matter what day time comes or when night falls to shadows you are there, here with me shudders escaping again in silent sighs this brain refusing to rest, racing in its reach onward to what day time comes when you will be here, there with me and no amount of light when that day our time comes will see us as other than one. I am your promise. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is good to see you posting again, and this.. I am your promise. is the perfect ending to this wonderful write! Very well done. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
this... is perfect, in words and presentation. brava! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am your promise. whoooo hoooo, Outstanding, the entire poem, but these last two lines...whewwww what a way to ROCK, surely packs a whollop! Very much enjoyed |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
lovely, flowing. much enjoyed  |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
and no amount of light when that day our time comes will see us as other than one. I am your promise. Oh Yeah, I second that emotion. This is fantastic! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Exquisite !! Hugs, Chrislane  "At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How perfectly your words of love flow...A delight to read... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"I am your promise" wahoooo, 'tis beautiful Soleil The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good to see you back.i've missed you and your poetry |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when you will be here, there with me and no amount of light when that day our time comes will see us as other than one. I am your promise. Oh, yessssssssssssssss. *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Allow me to echo that Suthern lass....Oh, Yessssssssssssssss! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
After almost a week with too little poetry... I came back for a revisit to this one... it's that impressive. *S* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Oh, no. Now I'm going to have the Beatle's melody, Here, There, and Everywhere, floating in my head all day mixed up with your wonderful poetry. Love the promise you write about. Your words flow as smooth as silk. misc'e |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 What Pell said....I repeat! ....jo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice ..thank you... GR. |
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