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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Seasons shifting as the trees sway thoughts unspoken drift on breezes can you hear it as the wind stills? falling fast now, midsummer blossoms painted ladies crawl beneath oaktrees hanging vainly through the earlier sunsets their colored petals distorting to grey shadow. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poetry is always worthy of better replies than I am capable of writing! Love & Light, Linda  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess I sort of side with Earth Angel.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
such poetry in motion you weave...lovely |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A vision that comes alive for the reader...wonderful writing... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can see this |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Boy you are rushing the seasons. Enjoy the dog days of summer to their fullest then embrace the tide of falling leaves as they come. Like your stuff though so I am not being critical. Let the attacks begin! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Tho' a little sad, this is so beautiful and exactly the feel of this August morning. You are such an artist, Michelle! hugs you........jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I hate to admit that this was not what came to mind when I read the title....BUT...it fits quite nicely. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How you paint...the shadow, the light, the breadth...magical TD |
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