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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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From the notebook ~~~~~ {nights enfolding, holding close mystery of storm and earth} Such fine lines on smooth stones-- does any one really notice? they were born from summer shadows a place only you spoke of again tender waiting for grace to fall words remind me your eyes were color of storms dipped in indigo ink There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing gives a whole new meaning to, "love me tender" Hugs, you~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
melancholy at its best |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Such fine lines on smooth stones-- does any one really notice? they were born from summer shadows ============================ yessss... I notice.  But even better...you notice and then you write lovely heart etchings like this. Beautiful Lauren-girlie...missed reading you.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A fine memory and write enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Even stormy memories can keep us warm... Lovely, Lauren.  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Such fine lines on smooth stones-- does any one really notice? they were born from summer shadows a place only you spoke of" Yes...I notice...this is bittersweet Lauren. Beautiful. Love ya lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Surging, and beautiful....~P |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I like bluesy's comment... because, you do. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 just because I needed to read you today my friend... your heart touches so deeply... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
words remind me your eyes were color of storms dipped in indigo ink dear one... your words are always something to ponder and the images something to relish.. |
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