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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Within You are my "thought first" of the day keeping me fresh each morning, never dull or faded, as your colors belie the truth. You stand bold and adventuresome, while I watch you with arousing interest. There is something total about you that I seem to lack, but I am trying to add up to more. What is it that holds me to you, I ask, only because it brings to light those gifts that you carry, never wrapped or ribboned? An endless supply of acceptance. I praise you, because you are and enjoy you because you do and if there was ever a marriage of friendship I would define ours as one. We are a kaleidoscope of odds, constantly changing, patterns to color the moments viewed from our destinies. I have lost my edge, the tender of my words no longer sure if you realize the depth of my walk. When time spares us, I fumble in words and actions, cradling my thoughts, preferring to rise above them...if only And so I remain silent when I wish to speak and I speak when I wish to remain silent... at odds with the fall of each day. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo darling heart oh wow, this is truly wonderful writing, I wonder how you can imagine you’ve lost your edge when you can write like this. But then darling one you are ever modest. This is a perfect blend of thought and sense, a whisper of hope for an acceptance, wrapped in a cry of anguish for wanting such. I love it utterly, but then you know I’ve always adored your writing. as always Mushy warm hugs and soft smiles to stroke your soul today my sweet friend  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Good write with wonderful phrasings. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is truely wonderful very much enjoyed it  "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...yeah |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 Within runs deep infinitely beautiful soul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Emotions that swirl and pull, tug and push, causing the stammer or still of lips...ending in a cherished memory birthing once again a smile... Your depth is awesome, Wynter.... |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Agree with Magnus, you've such a talent for expressing what many would (and do) stumble and stammer over. Wonderful write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good evening Marsha...thank you for your always sweet responses. I hope all is well across the seas.  M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What is it that holds me to you, I ask, only because it brings to light those gifts that you carry, never wrapped or ribboned? An endless supply of acceptance. I praise you, because you are and enjoy you because you do and if there was ever a marriage of friendship I would define ours as one. Oh... I like this very much! *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen, I adored that last verse....oh, so true, I do the same thing at all the wrong times. .....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, Whiskey, Dixie and Dawn, thank you for the read and response... Barry...Emotions that swirl and pull, tug and push, causing the stammer or still of lips...ending in a cherished memory birthing once again a smile... your words are poetic ~~ and I am glad you smiled  Pell...how nice of you to say so, Thank you Suthern, friendships are so important Vandana, thank you Jo, I am always self talking after the fact and wish I could say what I want to when the time is right~~ Thank you for your responses, all. I appreciate each and every one. M |
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