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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-08-15 03:46 AM

Sensation
lost
I raced
the wind
and lost
but was
granted
asylum
in it's
indifference

Asleep
&
drifting

each minute
bled
of feeling

I connect
the dots
to what
is not
&
bask
in the
creation
of
nothing

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-08-15 03:49 AM

I liked this...I can relate

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-08-15 05:45 AM

" connect
the dots
to what
is not
&
bask
in the
creation
of
nothing"

i do that alot LOL
sometimes, it just aint there
no matter
how hard we try to make the connection

bask
bask on

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-08-15 03:03 PM

I believe you have written the perfect creation of something that echoes far beyond it's intent.
Excellent write.
TD

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-08-15 04:48 PM

I have certainly felt like this...
a good connection
of reaching across, this.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-08-16 05:22 PM

I connect
the dots
to what
is not
&
bask
in the
creation
of
nothing

Ahh yes, one of my favourite pastimes

Enjoyed.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

6 posted 2004-08-16 05:39 PM

liked this, much...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-08-16 08:49 PM

"I connect
the dots
to what
is not
&
bask
in the
creation
of
nothing"

Really profound, ~K~, and I really liked this very much!

....jo

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