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Open Poetry #33
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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2004-08-14 05:03 PM


Wake me inside my intersanctom
destroy my mind by being erase
the memories you bestowed upon me
set me free from my own misery


Take back my heart you so thoughtlessly
abused,its broke now it can no longer
be used. damaged scars broken china doll
faces as my tears trinkle down

The presence of you still remains within
me please just set these vile demons free

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-08-15 01:25 AM

good luck on setting them free

mine never seem to be willing to leave completely

a good cathartic write
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