Open Poetry #33 |
Heart Sultra |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Distant echo of surrounding highways Crowded streets consider magnetic sway Stillness follows me…circuit rider of healers Slow evolution, stumbling into believers Self-stamped themes, thinking European Frontier of passing days without pain As you stand in the justice of evening breeze Suffocation accounts for some measures of winter Is not the face of inevitability fascinating? Sacraments courting the mystery of probability Becomes the face of revelation, illuminating How superior to mysticism, this image and likeness is Transforming…the other side, uncovering civilizations Reading the likely seduction by ethereal warriors To a peace which surpasses any understanding It is Wright’s polishing the sterling silver of nature Rooted in the mystery of life and its behavior By divine association, center of man in the cosmos |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) you do work the words... far beyond my simple method and mind... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very wise lady with a beautiful heart |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome write! Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So many outstanding lines and metaphors. I'm going back to read it again. ....jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I read you and I feel like I just traveled through a time machine. Your work is like that for me, flashes of images connecting in surreal edges, making some sort of strobed sense that I couldn't translate even I wanted to. (see? yer contagious!) Enjoyed, LeeJ. |
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