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Open Poetry #33

you are a summer song

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-08-14 02:53 AM

You are a summer song
that just doesn’t quit,
and even though I’ve been hit
by your heat
I won’t melt.

You are
a summer song.
I am
a blank CD.

Record me.

inspired by a song sung by Chuck Prophet

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-08-14 04:22 AM

some people are that way

I've known a few in my lifetime

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-08-14 10:22 AM

ummmm, me like.
I could have thought
of a different ending,
same result...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-08-14 10:49 AM

Like it

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-08-14 02:23 PM

! ! ! Cute, very cute!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-08-14 02:44 PM

Midnitesun
That's what the midnight sun will do.

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

6 posted 2004-08-14 05:07 PM

I love this!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2004-08-14 05:12 PM

I thought this one was too short, and that it wasn't really ready to post yet, but I was impatient. LOL, but maybe sometimes it's better that way?

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