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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-08-13 05:39 AM

Ache Of Love

Empty is the ache
that pangs deep
within my chest,

Voice I long to hear,
such sweet intoxication
soothing my ear,

Makes me happy and blessed,

Hungry for your laughter,
I sit, starving, wanting
to eat of your mind,

Eat you up like a wolf,
stomache growling,
it's dinnertime,

Let me feast upon you,
every part of you,
I must devour,

For then, I become,
a love thirsty,
vampire,

Oh, the longing,the desire,
It burns within me,
a flame, your love ignites
my fire,

Mourning like a dove,
cooing lonely sorrow,
I am lost without your love,
Hope comes new,
with each tomorrow,

Nothingness, silence,
a void, dark existance,
an empty space,
where you should be,
beside me,

Holding my hand,
kissing my fingers,
my neck, ever so gently,
your eyes on mine,
two lives combine,

My arms inside yours,
sweet love warming us,
all over from head to toe,
You know, you are the other half,
to my soul,

I cannot breathe one breath,
without you any longer,
Oh, this ache grows stronger....

Come my love,
come to me,
breathe love into my soul,

So that I might live,
being completly loved,
becoming whole,

let not my heart die,
from being apart,
For then do I,
have only, half a heart,

Blind I walk alone,
for you are my eyes,
I miss you darling,
so deeply I miss you,

Let the heavens of blue,
hear my lonely crys,
for death would be but a blessing
in disquise,

Than to live without,
your love in my life,

Soothe my ache,
come lay your love balm,
upon my wounds,

Pour it thick,
lay it all over,
heal, soothe this ache,

Please my love , Please,
before my heart does break,

Bare your mind and soul,
deep into me, brand me with
your love, so I , like dove,
will be set free,

Oh this ache of Love,
this ache of love,

Is killing me......

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-08-13 08:22 AM

heartfelt and touching, very well done.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-08-13 08:54 AM

WOW!!!

WONDERFULLY DONE...and loved the ending...

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-08-13 08:58 AM

Romantic,
Wonderful you are truly a romantic.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-08-13 08:59 AM

Such passion......beautiful and stirring ~P

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-08-13 09:47 AM

very passonately written

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-08-13 10:08 AM

liked it a lot

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-08-13 07:41 PM

Fantastic writing...such a smooth silky flow of emotions...one of my favorites...James

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2004-08-14 04:51 AM

Your words drive deep into my soul...my heart...i am the wolf that watches over you vigilantly...your honour is my pride...your love is my life....feral wild love beats within me when you speak your heartwords to me...i feel them....thank you my precous love...

Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Look for love and happiness...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-08-14 11:06 AM

Oy, this is filled with passion and desire and longing and I know this feeling too. I love your descriptions and comparisons -- well done.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-08-14 12:44 PM

I love the ending there...awesome write!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

11 posted 2004-08-14 05:09 PM

ooo i like this one very hot and romantic

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-08-15 01:10 AM

AHR, inspired writing! So passionate!

......jo

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