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Passions Play {muse inspired and dedicated}
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Passions Play {muse inspired and dedicated} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Passion flows like a well of willing waiting to become a waterfall { cascading.} A perfect sensation of gratification {languishing in warmth} deep placed in open rivers flowing with sigh cries pleading. Unleashed, but tethered bound in desire burn of leather {feeding fire...} palms pressed an eternity spent held here in your passions play. {highly muse inspired..and dedicated....with my thanks...  }It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
love this stanza "Unleashed, but tethered bound in desire burn of leather {feeding fire...}" very intense poem in few words, great write. Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely, Beautiful. Are the words that come to mind. Hugs BonBon  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Passion flows like a well of willing waiting to become a waterfall { cascading.} outstanding vision...loved this and this A perfect sensation of gratification {languishing in warmth} could that also be called success/home? deep placed in open rivers flowing with sigh cries pleading. sharing each others souls intimately....splendid description Unleashed, but tethered bound in desire burn of leather {feeding fire...} simply shows ya, takes both the good and bad to appreciate love.... palms pressed an eternity spent held here in your passions play. and what a nice place to be, huh? Thank you for the magnificant tour, through a day in your life....incredible read! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse is being very gentle with your spirit... do it again.  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is ever lovely, what an inspiration and muse!  sweet  I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Your spirit is being very gentle with your muse... |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
mmm this gets me all warm and gooey inside...errr. Excuse me, gotta go see a man about a hat... Compelling description, gorgeously rendered. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Such passion becomes you!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpiritedOne~ YOU are a beautiful person, sharing such word-beauty with us all~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
At least two are smiling right now. Not me (though I am)...nor your muse...(though she is)...but You and someone who is very fortunate to have inspired you so greatly. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm, sensual and beautiful, like a warm caress. Very nice.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"deep placed in open rivers flowing with sigh cries pleading." What a line! Beautiful, passionate write, Donna! ....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
eor, thank you BonBon, I appreciate that, thanks. Lee, what a wonderful reply! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me! Hugs. Sunnylady, Unfortunately, I can only 'do it' when my muse agrees to 'do it'. Thanks hon. L~ some inspirations just can not be denied and have to be written about. Thanks sweetie. Toe, you are a doll, thanks! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Pell  thank you.Martie  thanks hon.Margie  Your so sweet, thanks.Barry, Inspiration comes from such wonderful places at times. Hugs. Susan, such a soft reply, thank you! Jo, Glad that you enjoyed this, thank you. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I enjoyed your imagery mucho. A lady of great appreciation... A pleasant poem with lots of great lines. Thanks, miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem whispers gently to my spirit...  Loving hugs, Linda  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Miscellanea I am glad you enjoyed the view. Thank you. Linda, hugs back to you. Thanks for peaking in. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
burn of leather {feeding fire...} ============================ you knew the moth would love those lines.  yep...your muse is a hottie. *L*  love the passionate side of your pen Donna-girl... moth anthem--smoke and ash.... I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sensually beautiful...your words refesh the reader and quench our thirst for passion...Bravo!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ladies, thank you all so very much! JM~ me thinks I like the moth anthem... very much!! Actually, very, very much!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(does happy dance) Oh Donna, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (smiles) I hate to miss any single poem of yours so I'm soooooo happy you sent me the link, yay! (big angel hugs) This reminds me very much of Greeneye's or Dark Stranger's style, I love your versatility sooooooo much, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey lil buddie, there you are! Have missed you, got your email yesterday and knew you had been trying to catch up on your reading and writing. Maybe life will allow you to spend more time here now. Wow, what a compliment sweetie, and oh how I wish I could write as good as them! Your a doll, I needed your words today. HUGS! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Passion flows like a well of willing waiting to become a waterfall { cascading.} Incredible line! Awesome writing. Thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey there gal, it's good to see you again. Thanks for dropping in! Hugs |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice words |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandanna, thank you, so good to see you! Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi sweet lady! Just got in the door from a month long vacation...and I'm so pleased I didn't miss this beauty. Love ya lady~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, Yup, just lovely. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A very beautiful write Donna. TD |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great write !! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Happy Friday All! Much thanks too!The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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