I Will Never Leave You Lonely W/Sunshine

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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-08-12 11:07 AM

Take this, my oath, my troth, my vow
For lives lived before, and now
Take this, my pledge, freely given you
I will never leave you lonely, it's true

I will never leave you lonely
'Cause you are my heart , my love
I will stay with you
As long as I live,
I am ready to give you anything,
I will never leave you lonely,

For you have shown me great new heights,
Magnificent vistas and starry nights
And I? I would give it all back to you
I will never leave you lonely.

I will never leave you lonely
Because you are my love
And I love you so,
I will leave you,
To the dawn
I will never leave you lonely.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-08-12 11:14 AM

bravo ladies, bravo!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-08-12 11:21 AM

Quite beautiful, poetesses!

"I will leave you, to the dawn ..."

Love, Margherita

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2004-08-12 12:29 PM

What a beautiful blending of poetic excellence

"I am nothing special, of this I am sure. I am a common man with common thoughts and I've led a common life. There are no monuments dedicated to me an

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-08-12 12:31 PM

well done! Yes!

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2004-08-12 02:33 PM

Thank goodness...the last time I was alone with Sunshine....well, let's just say, it was really interesting......

nice write yall..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-08-12 07:10 PM

Simply lovely -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-08-12 07:12 PM

Well done ladies....someone is getting a very reassuring feel from this...if only in
their dreams, if nothing else...Nice write!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2004-08-12 11:09 PM

Very, very nice ladies! Hugs, Chrislane

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2004-08-12 11:29 PM

Very lovely, Vandana, Sunshine! I'm impressed! More? Please?
misc'e

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-08-13 12:50 PM

you, two!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2004-08-13 08:31 AM

Yes, Misc'e, as soon as Vandana has more time, and we entwine our words once again...it was such a pleasure having an e-mail from Vandana, asking if I would like to duet. We need to see more of that from our other poets, as well.

It's a wonderful way to break the ice. Go ahead, e-mail that PiPster that you admire...see if he or she will duet with you. Sometimes schedules and time zones get in the way...but chances are? They will be thrilled to get an e-mail asking, "will you duet with me?"

Thank you again, Vandana, for such a lovely theme!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2004-08-13 08:39 AM

Cool write, my friends...enjoyed.

jwesley

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2004-08-13 10:23 AM

I had to come back for a second view of such a beautiful poetic blending.

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