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Together - Tanka
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Together - Tanka |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Together  Someone snapped a twig, My mate and I set our wing ~ Tandem, we snap reach. Someone touched a leaf, this, felt, Caution's flung ~ we stretch for wind. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Beautiful photo and such awareness of nature is shown here. The alertness of the birds at a single sound is astounding. I compare this to the awareness I have. I'm lucky to hear the alarm clock!!! This was fun to read and contemplate. miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Someone touched a leaf, this, felt, Caution's flung ~ we stretch for wind." What a setting; how beautiful both the flow of the words and the photo. Much enjoyed, SIL.  ......jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the way this write takes flight quickly, just as the birds did. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"We stretch for wind" ~ Love that line! ~ and "Together" is such a beautiful word!  Have a wonderful day together! Linda  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The wings flash in the soft darkness .... beautifully captured love-flight! Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
holiday travelers every single day! Enjoyed both the snapshot and your words which protray something fabulously recognized. thank you for sharing |
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