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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Clearly I have carried it a bit too far and placed halos on those that could never deserve them I thought there was something so good in jars that didn’t open with the tops stuck on tight adding warmth to move them even traced my fingers closely around the lids to release the hold finding all that was really there was just what I had seen before nothing, just beautiful empty glass "i need a hand to help build up some kind of hope inside of me" TRAIN [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (08-10-2004 03:57 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
even traced my fingers closely around the lids to release the hold finding all that was really there was just what I had see before nothing, just beautiful empty glass Such a beautiful but poignant write Helen, and so very well done. Hugs. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A delicate and wistful write...but as you have so eloquently written, there remains a measure of beauty even in an empty glass. EA  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now that is awesome! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Wonderful analogy, Helen! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow !!! you " Clearly " described the feeling so well Hope |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
WOW!!! what a way to express  very good |
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