Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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2004-08-10
09:24 AM
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It comes to me, this sweet melody stirred softly on gentle wind. I hear the spirit of wild inside
{tambourines echo through night’s silence}
Dark eyes still pierce my soul when breezes stir this ballet of trees.
Flames flicker,
memories silhouette
still burns images
traced in desires hold.
Tonight the stars dance {a sway of lovers song} in their own rhythm divine
and again I am entranced, mesmerized by the sound of your gypsy lullaby.
It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins}
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2004-08-10
09:28 AM
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entranced in the gypsy of his soul...what a write girl! Beautifully expressed in words that are a pleasure to read...always!
Hiya, and good morning, wishing you a lovely day!
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2004-08-10
09:29 AM
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ah, that clangy, tangy, tambourine...
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Cpat Hair
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2004-08-10
09:31 AM
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nicely done...
the form and content both providing the reader with the wistful and longing.. of a heart drawn by melodies that maybe only it can hear...
enjoyed this ma'am... indeed so far one of my favorites from you..
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-08-10
09:35 AM
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Lee, I never quite thought of it that way, but yes, I love the way you define it. Good morning back at you doll.
Ah but mum, sometimes it's not a clangy sound, but a soothing rhythm. hugs.
Cpat, I love this "a heart drawn by melodies that maybe only it can hear..." and yes perhaps that is exactly what it is something that each person hears inside. Thank you much sir *lil curtsies*
It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins}
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2004-08-10
09:39 AM
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"Dark eyes still pierce my soul when breezes stir this ballet of trees."
~ I do believe this is what is referred to as "p-o-e-t-r-y"!!!
Love & Light, Linda
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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-08-10
10:28 AM
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Oooooh, lovely. Filled with magic -
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-08-10
12:34 PM
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ah...sweeet!
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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
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2004-08-10
01:55 PM
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I’ll light the Bon Fire, You bring the tambourine I’ll bring the wine You play the song Perhaps we’ll dance And talk till the embers grow cold
Enjoyed your poem
Gloom
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-08-10
02:06 PM
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Linda dear lady, thank you so much for that!
Thanks Susan magical moments just have that effect on us. lol....thanks so much.
Ahhh Dixie my poet sister, thank you!
That is such a warm thought Proff, thanks so much for that.
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muted
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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2004-08-10
11:34 PM
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there is something about those gypsies, that just mention of their singing and music makes anyone feel free!
and makes ya feel like dancing in circles! loved this
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
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2004-08-10
11:40 PM
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Flames flicker,
memories silhouette
still burns images
traced in desires hold.
Yea, that!! Oh Donna, hugs sweetie~
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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2004-08-11
03:45 AM
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Oh, Donna, I can feel this....it's calling to me to dance free, this gypsy song. Much enjoyed. ....jo
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2004-08-11
11:53 PM
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Really nice...James
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MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
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2004-08-12
12:23 PM
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very nice
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-08-12
07:20 AM
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My thanks and appreciation to each of you. I wish there were more time right now to be here, so I apologize for the group replies.
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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2004-08-12
06:15 PM
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GentlestSpirit~ Oh YES dear girlie ... you know I like it very much~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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