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Gypsy Lullaby
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Gypsy Lullaby |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It comes to me, this sweet melody stirred softly on gentle wind. I hear the spirit of wild inside {tambourines echo through night’s silence} Dark eyes still pierce my soul when breezes stir this ballet of trees. Flames flicker, memories silhouette still burns images traced in desires hold. Tonight the stars dance {a sway of lovers song} in their own rhythm divine and again I am entranced, mesmerized by the sound of your gypsy lullaby. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
entranced in the gypsy of his soul...what a write girl! Beautifully expressed in words that are a pleasure to read...always! Hiya, and good morning, wishing you a lovely day! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah, that clangy, tangy, tambourine... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... the form and content both providing the reader with the wistful and longing.. of a heart drawn by melodies that maybe only it can hear... enjoyed this ma'am... indeed so far one of my favorites from you.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lee, I never quite thought of it that way, but yes, I love the way you define it. Good morning back at you doll. Ah but mum, sometimes it's not a clangy sound, but a soothing rhythm. hugs. Cpat, I love this "a heart drawn by melodies that maybe only it can hear..." and yes perhaps that is exactly what it is something that each person hears inside. Thank you much sir *lil curtsies* It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Dark eyes still pierce my soul when breezes stir this ballet of trees." ~ I do believe this is what is referred to as "p-o-e-t-r-y"!!! Love & Light, Linda  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oooooh, lovely. Filled with magic -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...sweeet! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I’ll light the Bon Fire, You bring the tambourine I’ll bring the wine You play the song Perhaps we’ll dance And talk till the embers grow cold Enjoyed your poem Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda dear lady, thank you so much for that! Thanks Susan magical moments just have that effect on us. lol....thanks so much. Ahhh Dixie my poet sister, thank you! That is such a warm thought Proff, thanks so much for that. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
there is something about those gypsies, that just mention of their singing and music makes anyone feel free! and makes ya feel like dancing in circles!  loved this |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Flames flicker, memories silhouette still burns images traced in desires hold. Yea, that!! Oh Donna, hugs sweetie~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Donna, I can feel this....it's calling to me to dance free, this gypsy song. Much enjoyed.  ....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really nice...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks and appreciation to each of you. I wish there were more time right now to be here, so I apologize for the group replies. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Oh YES dear girlie ... you know I like it very much~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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