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Capture Your Heart
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Capture Your Heart |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Capture Your Heart tonight you don’t need a reason to miss me for I send to you a gift of crickets playing strings a lullaby whispered on the wind do they capture your heart? and hang starred lights against the darkest pleats of velvet setting the perfect stage for the moon to dance skin to skin with the night just open the window to know my presence there the air stirs my perfume there is your reminder as I softly walk rice paper to your dreams "i need a hand to help build up some kind of hope inside of me" TRAIN |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yes.. reminds me of my girlfriend who now lives 2000 miles away. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm going to have to hire you to decorate my bedroom. (That could be taken "funny" huh?) Oh what the hell, baby, let's give 'em something to talk about! (Haven't we always?  )But this is what I'm talking 'bout: "and hang starred lights against the darkest pleats of velvet" and "as I softly walk rice paper" gorgeous images, gorgeous you!  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Who ever said real magik can't be simple.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, I liked that rice paper imagery |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The rice paper walk got me, too! Much enjoyed!  ....jo |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Kacy beat me to it. and the window stays open as long as crickets sing . . . |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
captured for sure |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
rice nice ms slick kewl too |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful write, one with care and generous feeling. Enjoyed. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"setting the perfect stage for the moon to dance skin to skin with the night" yummmmmmyyyyyyyyyy K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this much |
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