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Tiering Up
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Tiering Up |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Tiering Up I diagram the aspects, zoned to given, moment's truth. Yours or mine or those above a statement needing proof... For me, belief's a breath away, whose quality endures. I am stimulated every day by loyalty of pure. Semantics, "pitch a fit" you know to each their own, device. Conforming to reality, mine, the honesty of nice. So here I sit, authentic me, eyewitness to each chord. The cadence of each spreading thought to slice through time, restored. I cycle you with eyes wide shut lamenting of back when, temptation's last, unlocking mind, a force field lure again. Drawn and quartered, moon's revolve traversing scene's behind. A thought or two, some odd, some new tuned to queue, aligned. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like it, nice flow.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, this was a musical ride...like a water ride, floating me into its arms...very uplifting, with a tremendous free hand of hope...lovely and should be put to music. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I cycle you with eyes wide shut lamenting of back when, temptation's last, unlocking mind, a force field lure again. insghtful... and well done ms M hope you are well.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Drawn and quartered, moon's revolve traversing scene's behind. A thought or two, some odd, some new tuned to queue, aligned. =========================== love the vocabulary and cadence of this... was such a pleasure to read aloud. For me, belief's a breath away, what a great line that is... lovely inspire poetess M. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"Drawn and quartered, moon's revolve traversing scene's behind. A thought or two, some odd, some new tuned to queue, aligned." such a powerful image... like the world is pulling everyehich way the pain is there but blocked out by thought, because there is more important things then the direction of the world... i enjoyed this very much so... Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have been writing from the depths again, mo. It looks great on you too! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice Maureen. Hope you are doing okay. |
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