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Open Poetry #33

Acorn

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2004-08-09 01:34 AM

Today I threw an acorn in the air
I said to God
"The seconds it stays in the air
are the days he will stay in my heart."
The acorn never hit the ground

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-08-09 01:35 AM

beautiful

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-08-09 10:10 AM

Lovely-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-08-09 10:12 AM

creative images, telling of love
wonderfully written

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-08-10 12:26 PM

wow!

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-08-10 01:53 AM

Heartfelt and imaginative writing!

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2004-08-10 04:47 PM

Thanks for all the positive feedback you guys. I love to hear from you all and know that someone out there is reading my stuff. Thanks again.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2004-09-23 10:45 PM

Cool!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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