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devinechild22
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0 posted 2004-08-09 01:34 AM



Today I threw an acorn in the air
I said to God
"The seconds it stays in the air
are the days he will stay in my heart."
The acorn never hit the ground

© Copyright 2004 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-09 01:35 AM


beautiful
Susan
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2 posted 2004-08-09 10:10 AM


Lovely-

Susan

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3 posted 2004-08-09 10:12 AM


creative images, telling of love
wonderfully written

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4 posted 2004-08-10 12:26 PM


wow!

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

iliana
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5 posted 2004-08-10 01:53 AM


Heartfelt and imaginative writing!
devinechild22
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6 posted 2004-08-10 04:47 PM


Thanks for all the positive feedback you guys. I love to hear from you all and know that someone out there is reading my stuff. Thanks again.
                   *Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

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7 posted 2004-09-23 10:45 PM


Cool!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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