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Turn Around Trails |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Turn Around Trails  If I lose myself, and in all possibilities, it’s a promising probable, but if I were to lose myself, would you come, following crumbs? For the light shines there, this pathway is clear, no matter where it leads… look how shadows fold in mists are cool, and calling water must be close by… for I hear them falling, soft inner rain mists soul comforters if I lose myself, would you still hear my footsteps? Would you come, to find me, to hold me, even in the mists? Is it worth your time, once again? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
fantastic work... much enjoyed... regards sudhir |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oooohhh Lady....oh....this is breathtaking.....YES |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beatiful poem...simply filled with visuals...but offer this, which I believe you already know...true love never has to ask...you just simply know they will be there, as you would do for them...you'd be there in a heartbeat...Sunshine, your a very loving caring person, a nurturer, soft mother of many. Now, as to this poem, it is lovely and shows the vulnerable side of the human heart, the one that doubts at times, and wants to just be reassured and hear a word or two. The pic is way appropriate, and as always, your words soft and inquisitive...truly enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, Lee said it best beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely, lovely penning.....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Echoing what Lee said.. and I am so pleased this computer let me read and respond to this beauty before another pop up appeared!! Hugs~ |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
exquisite writing. Very much talent is hiding in the ink of this poem Love, |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
Wow, Sis, this is really wonderful. You can hear the frogs and birds as you read. You have touched more hearts than you could know. "Love is a Sword of both pleasure and pain.. To have loved at all is the treasure we gain." -R Rilling |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For the light shines there, this pathway is clear, no matter where it leads… look how shadows fold in mists are cool, and calling water must be close by… for I hear them falling, soft inner rain mists soul comforters ================================= ya knew the tree hugging moth was gonna find this one.  Lovely lovely lovely....... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I can't imagine it not being so. I love this....the poem, the thought, and the presentation...beautiful stuff. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Always. *S* This is stunningly beautiful, dear lady! *S* |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Fabulous! Loved this so much. I hope he'll come again. Hugs, Marti Look deep, deep into nature, |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
loved it, makes me want to go there and find out |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful Karilea. hugs, Chrislane Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This trembling coin I keep on tossing Wondering if words or pix are bossing The fine thoughts held in mental housing Of how you make up each word's choosing. A pleasure to read..as always. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have such a gift to pull just the right feeling from what is seen, and to give it to us, allowing us to join you in your trek...Yes, yes I would... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely call to your intended...perfectly befitting the photo, too. Your words are as a 1000, though so few in number. The images are powerful and summoning. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, that does it. Virginia, your comment brought forth the unusual breakdown for me. Especially after I just wrote to a very dear friend here at passions, and told her I am on a new mission [an old mission, actually, just revived...] I want to thank each and every Passions member who has ever stopped to read any of my writings. Call it what you will, I've already gone through my change of life - perhaps this can be called "the change of direction" - and so many of you have, not only in the past, but most recently, said..."just do it". At this age? It is a tremendous undertaking. The young never know what they stand to lose. The elder of us - have a lot to lose - but Virginia? Yes, there is a Santa Claus - and sometimes it is us, ourselves, in disguise. So bear with me, my friends, if you see a bit less of me around here, while I delve back into my dream, and honor the likes of those I have read with pleasure, by giving them what they have been prodding me to do - and they know who they are... and know what it is I am about to undertake. Thank you ALL....   |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I thought I had replied to this wonderful poem, but I see that I didn't...bad Martie! As for your new direction...go for it girlfriend!!!! |
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