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Open Poetry #33

From Newton to Tequila

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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0 posted 2004-08-06 01:39 PM

Settling.
    Past life
  within Newton’s apple;
   a worm
arrowed
           riding bronco
    in tequila’s ups and downs
Spinning
    side  to
side
Falling,
  bottled,
Settling


(I was kidding around with Sunshine about the ending of one of my poems.  In response to hers, I told her next time I'd write about a couple of worms--it'd be much easier!  It was!)

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (08-06-2004 10:33 PM).]

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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1 posted 2004-08-06 01:47 PM

Very cute! Enjoyed a bunch.

...jo

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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2 posted 2004-08-06 01:53 PM

iliana,
glad you did... at least one of us did. Take care, big sis. LOve ya,
cathy

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

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3 posted 2004-08-06 10:36 PM

Gotta love those love worms.

Cool write.

:-)

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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4 posted 2004-08-06 10:40 PM

froggy,
Thanks for the "cool" write. Actually I imagine tequila to be rather warm, but I've never had the nerve to sample! There's something about that sacrificing little worm! Thanks for reading this little ditty...
miscellanea

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-08-07 12:52 PM

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2004-08-07 01:41 AM

Cute, love your spirit gal!!!

Got limes???

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