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"Sea" Breeze
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"Sea" Breeze |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
“Sea” Breeze A semblance of the sea rushing and ebbing was found in wind today. The tinkling of the dancing chimes set my mind at play. It caused a longing for the gulls and salt-air pungency. Of taffy pulling beyond the glass and a walk beside the sea. Oh, come along as moon wanes and sun rises above the surf; we’ll skitter with sandpipers along the sandy turf. ©July 7, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It caused a longing for the gulls and salt-air pungency. Of taffy pulling beyond the glass and a walk beside the sea. I believe that longing ever present in every second of my life... Enjoyed this with every fiber of my being...especially languid, descriptive and soft. A rich mellow chello to the soul. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This reminded me of my recent visit to the ocean....ah...sweet memories. Very well done VAS. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
very beautifull |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Makes me want a vacation fore sure! Great poem, VAS! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
great story Virginia, and your flow is impeccable. Well done. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Reminds of a summer long ago on an Oregon beach . . . Thanks e |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reads like a perfect summer day!!! Just beautiful, VAS~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a pretty piece |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Oh, come along as moon wanes and sun rises above the surf; we’ll skitter with sandpipers along the sandy turf." Loved that part...cool write!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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