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A poet's production
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A poet's production |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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with your words you paint the sky with brush strokes poetic your images, finely drawn gift life to the ordinary in creation of the extraordinary with your phrases you set emotions coursing into a river of feeling and your heart sings in an aria of flow orchestrating deep, thoughtful tones my soul pauses wishing only to linger amongst this production of yours s.a.t I found this one in my box at work, I had written it some time ago, but I don't think I ever posted it, so I hope it is not a duplicate -- I didn't see where I had, but I kinda like it, so here it is. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And you, my dear, are a poet!   EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh I am glad you did! I likie very much!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
your images, finely drawn gift life to the ordinary in creation of the extraordinary So true of you and the poets here...Delight to read. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this...and you are so right a gift to the poet |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully poetic indeed , I enjoyed this Hope |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all my fine poet friends who gift to me your own symphonies  susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am grateful that you found this...For it is a gem of a poem. Well worth the aging. Like a fine wine that only gets better over time. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Barry Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Very nice I'm glad you found it Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I don't remember reading this before and I have saved most of yours, Susan. This was lovely and it is joining the others!  ....jo |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Makes me wonder if you were writing about yourself...because I see you as a great poet... Love and Hugs ~ARH  "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You are all so very kind. And ARH, what a sweet thing to say, thank you. In truth, I was thinking of all of you and the beauty you create for me and the joy reading your work brings to me. And the amazing effects of poetry on one's soul. love ya, SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Its new to my eyes Susan I really like this one. :-) |
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