Open Poetry #33 |
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Not Met [Waka] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
![]() Though we have not met, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh these quiet peaceful summer days and nights. How I love to sit and look up into the sky, and the full moons fill me up....incredibly beautiful picture and song. Thank you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Though we have not met, as the moon crosses the sky your voice lingers- in dewdrops on the lotus gathered in the long dark night. we meet in drops of rain in leaves that wander the storms of august we meet through the language of fingertips touching the sky that shares us. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OMG -- completely complete and gorgeous, Paul! ......jo |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
lovely |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
nice. Beautiful picture to capture the poem Love, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice, as is inkedgoddess' reply. Lovely. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Inkked Goddess for this lovely poem of ethereal beauty
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Lee J, Yes there is something especially beautiful about summer full moons and they feelings they evoke. ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Susan, I certainly agree with you about Inkedgoddess's poem.....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Jo, its good to see you and I hope to delve into your wonderful poetry once again very soon...~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Tequilla and Kellie for your kind comments ~P |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Though we have not met, as the moon crosses the sky your voice lingers- in dewdrops on the lotus gathered in the long dark night. ````````````````````````````` We drink the blossoms dewdrop nectar kissing lips tickling the tongue where distant voice takes reprieve a sleeping echo of you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such a pretty sight to see and read, not to mention the thoughts going through my mind. Beautiful work choshi~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow... a beautiful one |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Though we have not met, as the moon crosses the sky your voice lingers- in dewdrops on the lotus gathered in the long dark night. though we have met we stand separate again divided as dewdrops amid the forest of disrobing branches somehow finding consolation beneath the splendor of autumn |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
In their brief moment where will they find respite? morning dewdrops- withered leaves no longer hold them in the rising sun's light. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Though we have not met, as the moon crosses the sky your voice lingers- in dewdrops on the lotus gathered in the long dark night. ~P though we have met we stand separate again divided as dewdrops amid the forest of disrobing branches somehow finding consolation beneath the splendor of autumn ~Inked In their brief moment where will they find respite? Morning dewdrops- fallen leaves no longer shade them from the rising sun's light. ~P [This message has been edited by choshi (09-25-2004 08:23 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Though we have not met, as the moon crosses the sky your voice lingers- in dewdrops on the lotus gathered in the long dark night. ````````````````````````````` We drink the blossoms dewdrop nectar kissing lips tickling the tongue where distant voice takes reprieve a sleeping echo of you ............................... In moonlight, breeze kissed petals quiver touched by echos- in the voices of hearts beyond what's near or far. |
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