Open Poetry #33 |
Your Face |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Your Face My fingers read your face by Braille And sink in thoughts below the Vail I know in time that thorns will bear But in my love I do not care. There is a force that leads me on It stays with me and never gone It plays the strings within my heart Hypnotic is the songs impart And I am quote unquote the mark That sees the rainbow of the arc And follows the road to utter muse Trying to watch my P’s and Q’s And there beyond horizons last I see the vision of the cast Not in coinage of the realm But apparitions overwhelm And in this netting we are caught Until we reach our final port. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Sy, good morning to ya how are you doing today wishing you and your family well No matter what, where and when the goodness of your heart prevails nothing more nothing less and yet, worth a million Your a peach! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning sweet, I think your a peach too. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I am quote unquote the mark That sees the rainbow of the arc And follows the road to utter muse Trying to watch my P’s and Q’s ~*~ I think your muse is sputterin' perhaps he's even stutterin' at the ease by which you write keeping times both dark and light... Good morning, our Sy! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
master sy seascape date with tie downs and flowers... nice touch guy!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning, Dark, Thanks for the read and reply guy. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"My fingers read your face by Braille And sink in thoughts below the Vail I know in time that thorns will bear But in my love I do not care." ~ I cannot adequately express, how truly touching I found those words to be. You, dear Poet, have a very beautiful Face ~ within and without. May a rainbow be your crown, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hey you can read me in braille you cute dragon you! Opps, don't let that Isabel read this, she will be after me with her broom! Sir, you will indeed be caught in net, until the end of time I bet. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Enjoyed today's poem; have a good day, Sy. misc'e |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical...! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I won't let her see this. miscellanea Enjoyed your reply. hugs Ericc Thank you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And you are the sweetest Angel I know. Dark, I knew you would understand. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And I am quote unquote the mark That sees the rainbow of the arc And follows the road to utter muse Trying to watch my P’s and Q’s" Understood and appreciated! ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you, |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Beautiful.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A wonderful piece of writing here Seymour that was so very much enjoyed. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Endlessecho Thank you for the beautiful. Suetang Thank you so much for the read and reply. vandana Thank you dear. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: So beautiful! That force ... is Love! Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Yes it is, thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My fingers read your face by Braille And sink in thoughts below the Vail I know in time that thorns will bear But in my love I do not care. I can't begin to tell you how this touched me... but oh... how it did! *S* But it's more than a trigger to a special memory... it's a beautiful work... Excellent! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Once again you made my day, thank you sweet. |
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