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Open Poetry #33

Someone That I Knew

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-08-05 01:00 AM

Someone That I Knew (Special)

On my wall
a photograph
of someone that
I knew.
I have the
photograph,
I don't have
you...
I would rather
have you,
but I failed and
there was nothing
I could do,
except say goodbye,
farewell to you.
Breaking up was
hard to do.
I'll always remember you
as someone that I knew.

JamesLee
August01
2004
I was thinking of
someone special from
a long time ago today.
She seemed so close
even though she's
far away...

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

1 posted 2004-08-05 01:08 AM

Aww, this poem was sad. It made me cry. I liked it though.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-08-05 01:21 AM

What if she were thinking of you that very moment as well?...

Memories do have a way of keeping us warm.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-08-06 12:03 PM

Thank you Kellie Cantrel and Earth Angel for the nice responses...
Earth Angel perhaps she was thinking of me but she would have to have lots of forgiveness in her heart to think nice thoughts of me...her picture seemed to be glowing...James

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-08-06 10:48 PM

JamesMichael,

This is very beautifully written,sad too.

It makes me think of someone from a long time ago.

Hugs

:-)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-08-07 12:51 PM

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