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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Home if some day you find yourself totally alone and the world has turned a back to you where no space feels like home and all touch has an empty feel I am here waiting for you believing unafraid saving a place where it is you belong "i need a hand to help build up some kind of hope inside of me" TRAIN |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this is precious |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I knew this of you, too. Lucky soul who has such a standing offer.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem truly does have the feeling of "Home"...  Love & Light, EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I felt a sad release with this.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick..I would be so blessed if your eyes were looking this way enjoyed your heart lady |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely read and feeling |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I told someone that once... and broke that promise because I knew if I put myself on hold like that waiting...he just might take advantage and hurt me again. I know that kind of dedication and hurt. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect! Eric |
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