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Lost at the Cinema Show '73
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Lost at the Cinema Show '73 |
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MexicoCityBlues Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48The Point of Know Return |
Rush your mind to the Cinema Show And dream with me... the movie will not be shown tonight due to lack of reality. sit down look at the sky beating this dead ceiling to seven watch it spin twirling summer nights around its finger over these rusted ruins look at the sky watch it decay and watch it blend watch the helpless hunter mend watch it live and watch it die watch the moon it bleeds and lies look at the sky ever wonder why we…? Who said cry? look there’s light in your stars. the trees are beginning to croon their soft rhythmatic medley of melody monstrous they call mooooaning mmmmmmmmmmmm still our forest falls. tidal movement stutters the lake vapid rapids we didn’t see in you but saw sawing me in two see? you still don’t see. the roads of life have bored themselves to death with their great length still…the road unwinds in circles isn’t everything a circle? I found your words in dreams I had about finding your words. look these eyes bloodshot killers …we haven’t slept for a week Do you remember Do you remember Do you remember street talk? Waiting for the sun i could spend my life here in this transitive theater of dreams Look at the sky. next time bring an umbrella. "Do you realize this world is totally fugazi?" --Marillion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
'73 -- that was a good year, and a turning point in my life. This brought tears to my eyes....very creative writing.  ...jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, very creative and two years before my time LOL but still enjoyed every word of it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful, the way you played with the words in this! Much enjoyed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You evoke the images that I only try for... I enjoy reading you very much, the fast clip of certain phrasings assonanced like that is amazing--the arrangement forces the reader to speed up then slow down, and the ability to do that is also a goal for me. Enjoy your work, muchly.  |
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