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Open Poetry #33

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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2004-08-03 03:55 AM

first blush of daybreak
edges over distant hills -
teakettle whistles.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-08-03 03:56 AM

Oh, good one, Beki!

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-08-03 04:21 AM

whew...you're up early!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2004-08-03 06:49 PM

tea kettleful song
railroad toddler dreaming
magnanimous soon

kewl whistle ms beki

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-08-03 07:06 PM

Excellent Beki!
I love these!
Hugs~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2004-08-04 03:31 PM

Almost missed this whistle!
A good one, Beki.

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

6 posted 2004-08-04 03:35 PM

sounds like a wonderful beginning of any day.

Contabo

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2004-08-04 11:50 PM

and forgive me for being late to the feast.

I wish my mind would think like this.

(new fan, me)

forgive my tardiness.

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