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What Stands Apart The Love (Duet with ThisDiamond)
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What Stands Apart The Love (Duet with ThisDiamond) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Friend What stands apart the love? Attraction is the fabric, same is as same does A somehow less degree escaping to futility What stands apart the love? Guardian, ever vigilant near swift waters as waves roll in. Shielded by angel wings in flutter Apart from love, though ever close The interest is compound Where twilight's still astound A somehow less degree, escaping to futility What stands apart the love? One who opens a door of listening, a hand to hold, a tear to dry. Knowing friendship intertwines as love’s shadow stands quietly beneath an umbrella of oak leaves. One kept warm within the soul of they who, not alone, walk their earthen path. Holding a moment of breath, sharing a thought, knowing the unspoken known before a trembling lip softly speaks. Were it not for the commitments Should it not beseech admittance A somehow less degree, escaping to futility. What stands apart the love? Never wavering, never wandering. Speaking not from anger or fear. Faithful and diligent, guided onward on a shared course as a light shines on shoal waters and love stands faithfully apart. What stands apart the love? Thanks K. you are an inspiration... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very, very nice. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"What stands apart the love?" I'd say you two have found the answer...and it touched me with it's truth...thank you! and that title? I wish I had tought of it!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Okay, is this hankey day or something? You, two, ..... grand job!  ....jo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Never wavering, never wandering. Speaking not from anger or fear. Faithful and diligent, guided onward on a shared course as a light shines on shoal waters and love stands faithfully apart. Oh Barry and Kathleen, such beautiful, beautiful romantic longing..... Excellent writing, you two.. Hugs to you both, Ethle |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh My...this is absolutely beautiful...the two of you sing of romance in your words...I love it... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful beautiful Kathleen and Barry!! You two pen the most romantic duets at PiP!! Wonderful seeing you both together here once again. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how wow I envy those who can do duets with such style and grace and beauty |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Two of my favorite voices...shared in beauty. Thanks! Eric |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Excellent duet...thank you both! |
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