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Open Poetry #33

Marechal Neil Blue

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2004-08-01 05:29 PM

Under the azure waves
of a pure-crested sky,
her hand turned a Blue Rose
over and over,
in taut circles.
She could see his smile
as he handed the Rose to her.
"Ah," he said, "This means
I am yours--heart and soul."
He had taken the thorns
from its slender stem,
so the Rose felt
smooth to the touch.
Her Blue Rose
...(marechal neil)
so blue and warm
speaking to her of:
his sure intentions.
She would fly her heart
into another Rose of blue
and hand one back to him
declaring, "I will be true."

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-08-01 05:58 PM

How delightfully romantic!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-08-01 06:04 PM

So very beautiful...
enjoyed reading you again!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-08-01 06:09 PM

I am seeing a continuance to
this romance, m'friend...
please...carry on!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-08-01 06:24 PM

Ivy Rose, this was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! If you interested, here's my blue rose /pip/Forum83/HTML/003003.htmp

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-08-01 06:54 PM

Ivy, welcome back....pleased to have you
here and with such a beautiful write of
a blue rose...Nicely done!

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