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Open Poetry #33

Seconds Tick W/Whisky

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-08-01 11:05 AM

Long moments passed,
Staring at the clock,
Tick tock tick,
The sound of seconds,
Getting lost into vortex of time

Looking back at these moments
Spending time with you
Reminding me of you and I
As I stare at the clock
Thinking if we could make it,

Make it happen once again
Share a warm moment
Without this terrible time keeping clock
Ticking our seconds away into lost memory

To hold one another
Make it happen once again
Between us
Sharing this momend
Without any seconds
On the way

Snap my eyes dart
Focus on the door as it open
In through you walk
Smiling,racing toward me
In seconds we are embracing

The clock it ticks
Tick tock tick
Without hearing neither
Unable to hold my attention
Loneliness not waiting as before

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-08-01 12:42 PM

nice duet!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-08-01 01:50 PM

When we wait the tick-tock is so LOUD!
And then ... in a second we are out of time ...
Beautifully expressed.
Love, Margherita

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-08-03 10:39 AM

Enjoyed, you two!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2004-08-03 10:41 AM

WOW!!! I could hear the tick tock of life..well done you two...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-08-03 10:41 AM

Enjoyed, you two!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-08-03 10:46 AM

Beautifully penned you two!
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-08-03 02:20 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-08-03 02:40 PM

Enjoyed --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-08-03 03:20 PM

Yep... very nice!

JL

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