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Constellated Bond
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Constellated Bond |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Constellated Bond the stars are scattered overcast seemingly strewn at random for wonderment; grapes ripe in the wind plucked by a sextant, then sipped through a winter night by travelers gliding silent wind borne on on paths mapped out by the imagination with stellar guidance yet it falls on each to cast his footing Contabo no matter who tells us our poetry is good or bad, it falls on each of us to choose what we write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Contabo "on paths mapped out by the imagination" And, a wonderous path it is! I've been on it a few times myself. Enjoyed much! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I so very much enjoy your style of writing... This is excellent! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: a wonderfully truthful write thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's good wow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... seemingly ... but there is the design and we can take part in it, yes ... Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Thank you all for your comments and I do appreciate that you took time to read. Martie, it is always a joy when a reader pastes a line they were pleased with. Enchantress, as I grow, my style may change, I hope you change with me! Midnightsun, I am glad that a line touched you also. PS, “wow” says it all. James, thank you for your encouragement. Margherita, again I am happy that a line appealed to you. Yes, there is a design in all of nature. How wonderful it is. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ooooooooh, nice writing! ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have some pretty amazing lines in this poem!!!  In fact, just imagine that I just quoted the whole poem! lol  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Contabo Enjoyed the read. |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
iliana….how many “o’s” in oh did that comment have??? Earth Angel, I really appreciate your kindness. I was unsatisfied with this poem. I think it needs more work. Seymour, I am grateful you took time to read. Contabo |
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elfine Junior Member
since 2004-06-08
Posts 35traveling |
I like this. Your word choice makes the image so vivid, and yet something I have to read and re-read while it all slips together. Nice, the deliberateness with randomness. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Thank you very much elfine. |
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