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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Gold Chain Glistening gold chain Riding on your tanned ankle Catches my soft gaze. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Glint of draping chain up and down with her breathing draws one closer still |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now, that I would believe! I can just visualize a beach, the ocean, gorgoues tanned leg with sparking gold chain.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Golden links bind heart a gilded chain most precious to my maiden fair  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful reply Karilea. Thank you. Iliana you saw the whole picture. I'm pleased and grateful for your support. And yes she does treasure the gold thin chain on her ankle. Thank you Susan for your beautiful reply. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (07-31-2004 09:17 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very beautiful dear Scorpio.. May I add ~ Such a precious gift Dances on her tanned ankle As they stroll the shore. ~Smiles, Hugs & Love ya, Tinker~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely ....... especially the "soft gaze" ... Love, Margherita |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Gold chain such as yours, A silver across ankle, Time passes too soon. Excellent. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker thank you for your warm reply. A precious gift for a precious lady.  believe in what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Margherita for your kind comments. And you're so right Moon Dust. Time passes much too quickly. Thank you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect scorpio! Loved this. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Chris. I'm glad you enjoyed this. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Scorpio, thank you for being so inspirational...and thank you for allowing us to "add to" with our own thoughts. You are a very sincere, and romantic, poet. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for the bump Tinker.  That's very kind of you Karilea. Thank you!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Good one,  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely crafted....Yes! This most certainly would bind the eyes to absorb all it's beauty.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for the thumbs up Sy. Much appreciate!! Barry thank you for the comments and support. Glad to see you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I put one on my sweethearts ankle...it fit just right...James |
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