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Open Poetry #33

Loving the Moment

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-31 03:18 PM

Loving the Moment

I am soaked with thought
dripping uselessly waiting for
a need to reason my life.

Importance doesn't seem to matter.
The heat enough to blister my back
wanting to feel the cool of memory
and me, searching in that sudsy pail
for clarity.

I tie back my temptations,
letting the ribbons flow as the breezes
send hair wisps about my face
pressing me on.

I let the spray bounce off the reflections
and mist me, laughing, as I try to control
the uncontrollable, thinking how crazy I am
about so many things...

I would love for you to see me like this,
the all of me, moistened with reality
mending my feelings and embracing life.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-31 04:39 PM

Oh, M gal, this is great! I'm so pleased to see this!

.....jo

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-31 04:44 PM

Maureen,
Yes I would.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2004-07-31 04:48 PM

Uplifting and spirited poem!

believe in what your heart feels...

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2004-07-31 04:58 PM

Moisten with reality,
With every effort there to see
Rolling down smooth skin
Over rises and valleys
Finding places to pool in
Before continuing their way
Watering fantasy

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-07-31 06:32 PM

Oh..*s thank you all, I was just trying to wash my car in very hot weather and between the sweat and the hose I was getting cooled off by the spray ...only got it half done though before I quit...have to do the rest tomorrow very early before the sun heats the day.

M

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