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Trynete
Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 1999-09-06 05:04 PM


I'm so tired,
so tired of always being alone,
tired of being home.
I'm so tired of being depressed,
I'm tired of always needing to rest,
yet always feeling restless.
I'm so tired of being alone,
so tired of being on my own.
I'm so tired of my mom
always being mad.
I'm so tired of always feeling sad.
I'm so tired of feeling pain,
tired of always feeling like
I'm insane.
I'm so tired of feeling scare,
I'm tired of everything being
so unfair.
I'm so tired of always
feeling out of place,
I'm tired of trying to
win life's race.

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Trinity

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roxane
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-09-06 11:33 PM


I'm sorry for the way you feel. I hope that writing that poem was helpful to you. You did convey a lot of feelings there


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"Come night, come darkness, for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this." Charles Dickens


roxane


moonmoon
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
2 posted 1999-09-07 02:03 AM




Aww..((hugs))...Hope you feel better soon..Well written BTW..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr



poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 1999-09-07 11:36 PM


I've certainly been there, feeling what you're feeling....it's a horrible place to be. So tired of it all that you almost want to go to sleep and never awaken....I've actually written several poems about it....deep depression. I feel for you, although I hope you see sunlight soon....chin up!?

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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