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Trynete
Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 1999-09-06 11:52 AM


here's one of my most recent poems

Look what life has done to me.
I can hardly imagine my destiny.
My soul seems to slowly die,
with each day that passes by.
With each step I make,
another loved one the Lord
seems to take.
I can only hope the next one
will be me.
But do I truly want that
honestly?
Raindrops fall on my face,
and it feels so good,
cuz it somewhat changes
the pace.
I scream for help,
everyone listens.
But no one can understand,
so I guess now it's in my own hands.



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Trinity

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poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-09-07 11:46 PM


Very beautiful cry for understanding....You're right, it's in your hands....I heard someone say once -
"Life isn't about all our problems - rather, how we handle them, that's what's important!" Everyone is dealt a dirty hand from time to time, but it's all about how we choose to "handle" the situation....


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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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