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The Pain Is Much Too Real
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The Pain Is Much Too Real |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The darkness is my home now The light has gone away My eyes cannot see anything They can't see any pain But pain cannot be seen, but felt And I still feel it deep within Even in the darkness, It is felt, believed by me, Fed by me... So it still lives Lives in me like a virus Spreading every day Until it breaks me down into my own inflicted sickness The darkness is my home now The light has gone away My eyes cannot see anything But I still can feel, And the pain... The awfull pain... Is much too real. JOY |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Fed by me So it lives.... Really good description of the human condition. Well Done..... Jennifer  Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Very descriptive, describing that dark place inside we all have and visit. Been there, still there at times, know it well. Bravo Joy The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
That all encompassing pain is all to real for me too, Joy. Great poem, I can truly relate. Michael |
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