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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-12-08 09:09 PM

You made so many promises,
yet delivered nothing but pain.
You make me feel that my efforts
are just overtures made in vain.

You belong on a pedestal,
face frozen in terrible fright.
You deserve to be sacrifice
to bestial predators' delight.

You tore my soul with wedding claws,
then hungrily came back for more.
You showed me the Gorgon's true face
underneath the one I adore.

You have many things to explain
though in truth I'd rather not know.
I am content with the knowledge
that indeed you reap what you sow.

©1999 DreamEvil

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-12-08 09:52 PM

Amen !!

Well written Kind One

Love the descriptive use of words.
I can really relate to the last verse, as
I couldn't have said it better myself !!

Jenny Lee

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-08 11:20 PM

Indeed we all reap what we sow DE!!

This is how I too have felt, masterful words my friend

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

3 posted 1999-12-09 01:45 AM

ROFL!!
This struck a funny bone tonight!

Indeed, there is justice in this world!!!

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-12-09 10:36 PM

Ouch, Dark indeed my friend. Glad to see you on this side of the fence.

Michael

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

5 posted 1999-12-10 01:17 AM

Very nicely put! I can relate to this also.
The one who did it to me is reaping what he has sown now. Divine justice!

Terrina Kethryveris
Member

since 1999-12-06

Posts 53
USA

6 posted 1999-12-10 01:42 AM

Love this DE.

Terri

Truth be known, fantasy is much more appealing than reality.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 1999-12-10 08:18 AM

WOW Soul-Brother, this is GREAT!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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