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Dark Poetry #1

The Deaths

roxane
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 505
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0 posted 1999-09-02 11:02 PM

She fell like a flower petal
From the lily white world
her face went pale and hard
And her silky red blood stained
Her precious soft lips
The pretty girl died this night
All wrapped up in her bed
so complacent in her head
"we miss her so much and this is such a tragedy. Why God tell me why did you take her? this beautiful angelic soul...."
She fell like rotten fruit
from the dead summer world
her face so pale went blue
and her dark thick blood
left a vestige of itself on her walls
the ugly girl died this night
14 pages of prose left here
to those who hate her though she held dear
"she should die silently. (what a dumb whore) and if she'd died mysteriously at least it'd be more interesting"

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moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

1 posted 1999-09-07 02:06 AM

Gosh, what a depressing tale..My heart goes out to that lil' girl..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

rogen of the night
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 29

2 posted 1999-09-10 04:22 AM

Verry deep all of your poems have touched me in some form or another.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~

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