Dark Poetry #1 |
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Lithium |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California ![]() |
LITHIUM Oh, Lithium, my tactile dream, From frown to smile, from smile to scream. From depths below to Godless highs, A quelling mellow pent in lies. Nightmarish life to vision quest, Dare I trust you more than the rest? Passing profound such vivid hue Of reality set in blue. Oh, Lithium, in wayward glance, Come to me by the vial of Chance. The challenge of normality, Of virtue, of formality. In hopes to meet Society On a level preset for me, I walk in trance, the show begins, And so Abnormality wins. ------------------ Michael Anderson It's the little things you take for granted, That'll mean the most to you when they're gone. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-03-1999).] |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Whew... A Toxic Nightmare -RS ------------------ There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
well michael...I was reading your poem. I decided to post on of mine. I ended up "replying" instead of "posting". Oops!!! Sorry *embarrassed* Carman btw...I enjoyed your poem |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Another beauty! But Michael there is nothing abnormal about you my friend ![]() ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I disagree with Isis. I find many things about you extraordinary which by definition makes you far from the decadent homogenization that is called normality. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You hit this piece home with the last two lines. Well Done. Jennifer ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
OK DE!! Extraordinary yes, adnormal no.. Michael is an extradordinary talented man WITH a heart/soul too, and he's smart, now that IS extraordinary, not many men have all three!! ![]() ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow Michael...I don't even know how to reply! I get many strange feelings when I read this...I'd love to know the story behind it, for I'm sure there's one! BRAVO! I liked Isis' thoughts on you !! ![]() ------------------ - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do....- - pFF |
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