Dark Poetry #1 |
Sshhh, Listen |
lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I listen to the moon It tells me the secrets Of the night I listen to the stars It tells me there's going to Be a heartache tonight I listen to the song It's singing the tales Of the street I listen to my soul It tells me to never Never accept defeat On a quiet night You can hear a heart break |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Lostboy-- Yes...on a quiet night you can hear a heartbreak...perfect, lostboy, perfect!!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Very nice lostboy. My soul has told me the same, (that was my favorite part). Nice to see ya back. Missed you while you were gone. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
star... glad you like it so much, hope all is well w/ you danni...always welcome your feedback, thanks and missed you too! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I too listen to the moon..... ....She has many a secret to share! I always enjoy reading your work...such deep thoughts and heartfelt....enjoyed this jewel very much Jennifer Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks again Jen. The feeling is mutual. Yes indeed...many a secret! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I always enjoy reading your work too, such heartfelt wanderings Welcome back ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well now - this was quite unique! I liked it much! Thank you for sharing such a nice little piece! I too, love the moon....tis filled with magic ! ------------------ - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do....- - pFF |
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