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Ozzbat
New Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 9
Canada, Ontario

0 posted 1999-12-03 01:43 AM

A Tear Named MEMORY...

"And as he turned his back and walked away. The wind whistled as it forced itself through the tattered trees and helped lead the way by pressing firm against his back. The sun slowly sunk to it's nightly resting place, leaving her without a face, a mere silhouette amongst the darkness. He turned to look one last time but she was gone, swallowed by the blackness of night... He knew then that he would never see her again and from that, a tear began to swell in his one eye. Slowly, it ran down his face, along his nose,and over his lips. So softly did it touch his lips, that it reminded him of the how she had once touched him. Finally the tear made it's way over his chin and hung suspended, hanging there for dear life wanting not to fall. Then the inevitable, it fell... But before that tear could hit the ground, he named it! He named it MEMORY, then it hit, dispersed and disappeared! And never, would a tear fall for her again..."

Nov., 1999

[This message has been edited by Ozzbat (edited 12-04-1999).]

eegood
Junior Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 41
Chicago,IL

1 posted 1999-12-03 02:10 AM

heart felt passion at it's best....awesome!!

love, peace & happiness and all the goes with it

Jaguar
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

2 posted 1999-12-03 05:34 AM

Magically written!
Your piece of art, is a lot like my short story, I called Memories.

Hope to hear more from you!.

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

3 posted 1999-12-03 07:00 AM

Reminds me of a poem i once wrote about a guy commiting suicide and the thoughts that went through his head

Ah happy memories

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 1999-12-03 08:21 AM

Quite exquisite!

I love the title. . ."A tear named Memory"

So often are our tears named for the ones that we love. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

5 posted 1999-12-03 10:50 AM

I am in awe. Absolutely beautiful piece. I look forward to more.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-12-03 05:18 PM

Welcome to the Dark Forums

This was absolutely beautiful OB, thanks so much for sharing it with us, we hope for many more

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-12-03 10:55 PM

Then it hit,dispersed and disappeared...Glorious little piece!

Jennifer Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Ozzbat
New Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 9
Canada, Ontario

8 posted 1999-12-04 04:43 AM

Thanks for the encouragement,
I'm new to this site, but have always enjoyed writting what i feel. Some may be good, alot may be bad, but feelings they are. Thanks again, and hope to get to know some of you better through your work and/or replys.

Ozzbat
new poem posted: I Dream
Hope to hear from you...

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