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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
It follows Run away All it destroys Run far Destruction With deaths Breath On your neck Run swift can you hear Hear beat Roar on the wind Run on and on Will it kill Will it catch As you run You escape No time to ask And soon you die Not run any more Now you fly ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Quite intriguing. I enjoyed this one. Lets the reader put their own "monster" in the role. Well done. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Yes, very intriguing...i like the whole "running, chasing" theme...keep it up  ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed I too enjoyed this, but do tell what your monster is like, or is it our own personal monster???????????? ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
very, very interesting slice of work...it's has a uniqueness of all it's own |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
Beautiful piece of art! enticingly beautiful. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The Monster changes as we grow giving it a face gives it in my mind a limited life Without a face it will exist through time immorial ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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