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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
My god ignores me My family dies My Prayers unheard My Legs are scarred My belief is tainted My prayers are ignored My heart is weak My pain unending My Relief death Lonely Alone And god ignores me ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Your work here screams desolation.......... .....well done. Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
i like this one because it is somehow chilling to think about...sometimes our prayers are unanswered...hmmmm...makes me think... ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I take it you aren't one of those people who believe that everything happens for a reason. ------------------ JOY |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Makes me think think too, not neccessarily that sometimes prayers go unanswered, but that sometimes, the answer is ....no |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I agree with LostBoy, sometimes the answer is NO, whether we like it or not, whether we understand it or not. A thought, if we got EVERYTHING we wanted we wouldn't be the people we are today. Pain and heartache are great teachers my friend  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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