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I Hate Being Cold.
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I Hate Being Cold. |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
Its cold in here.Probly because im alone now. It wasnt always like this ya know.There was fire in me,it would burn for hours.My touch was smooth. My voice was soft and caring.My eyes said nothing short of love and passion.I was told I even tasted sweet. Now my touch feels like swift daggers,that fire has been replaced by cold rejection,my eys have hate and disapointment in them and my voice.....well my voice you cant even here anymore.But darling who ever you may be dont give up on me just yet I long to be restored.To feel my own blood running thru my veins.Im so cold here. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I love the "who ever you may be, don't give up on me" line. To beleive someone's out there looking for you as you look for them keeps the heart strong. I hear your voice. "Warmest" wishes to you!! |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
thank you lost boy for your interest and encouraging words ...I know one day it will happen im just being taught patience right now... |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Summer, I believe I'm starting to here your voice. That's the first step. Hang in there with us and we'll get that fire burning in you again. Nice work -RS ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your inner flame never goes out!! Only weakens.. Stoke it, feed it, and you'll be similing and radiating again  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Summer-- The line about being so cold makes me shiver...you must be really hurting right now...if you need to talk you can email me anytime, k? ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Summer... This is heartfelt and moving, it sounds like you are on the right track I know you will be someones "fire" again, I can feel it in the passion of your writing.------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Your touch will be smooth once again your voice will be louder than ever your eyes will see that Love you will taste sweeter than before But most of all your fire will be enough for two hearts. WARMEST wishes sent to help you along the way. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
TO EVERYONE WHO REPLIED...YA KNOW THIS ONE CAME STRAIGHT FROM MY HEART ..I MEAN I USUALLY RIGHT THEM IN MY JOURNAL FIRST THEN SUBMIT THEM BUT I JUMPED RIGHT IN THE FORUM AND JUST STARTED WRITING ...AND HERE IT IS..THANKYOU FOR THE WORDS OF ENCOURAGMENT AND CARING.... |
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