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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
Rose petals must not be enough To take the passion Deep inside of you What am I to do It's just so far away Becoming dimmer with Each and every day If I only knew The first time we kissed I can still feel it Savoring on my lips Your's will always be missed So much I want to tell you That burning in my soul It was you all along Guess I don't understand When things look up And up looks down And time keeps moving on Leaking through the hourglass Scattering on the ground I'm still around Chance picked an unfortunate fool To chase you through a Confusing world of intrigue Your hair was so gentle You left the door cracked open "Cause you knew I would enter to feel your precious touch but it hurts so much. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
No Vacany is so sad Eegood! (HUGS) are needed I think so there's one from me  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
Isis, Thank you for your hugs...but I must say, It's welcome but not needed. The poem I attempt to write don't reflect my emotional being. I'm extrembly greatful for your concern. I'm grateful for each and every experience, good and bad, which has me the man that I am today. Life is love and Love is Life...peace |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, I can feel the longing in this one...excellent piece. michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Savoring on my lips....wow love all the descriptions of this piece. Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sorry Eegood, when in doubt I hug ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The title, No Vacancy, is perfect for this poem, eegood! Also, I loved the 5th stanza the best! |
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