»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #1
»
The Dweller
| Dark Poetry #1 |
|
The Dweller |
|
|
Bathory Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 11OH. |
BLOODY HAND PRINTS ONTHE WALL, SUICIDE NOTES LITTER THE HALL, MANGLED CORPSES LITTER THE FLOOR, UPSIDE DOWN CROSS ON THE DOOR, RIPPED UP PICTURES OF HATED ENIMIES, TACKED UP NEWS CLIPPINGS OF PAST FELONIES DIRTY BED SHEETS ON A ARMY COT BEHEADED RATS LEFT OUT TO ROT BLUE FACED WOMAN HANGING IN THE CLOSET RED WATER DRIPPING FROM THE FAUCET SINGLE MAN SITTING IN A CHAIR FACE WORN AND DRAWN IN HORRID DESPAIR DOOR OPENS WIDE AND STEP INSIDE MEN IN WHITE JACKETS COME TO TIE HIM IN BRACKETS MAN LIGHTS MATCH AND WITH OUT A SOUND HOUSE BURNS DOWN...... TO THE GROUND |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Kristi - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
SCARY! I really liked this poem because it is a rude awakening to what is too come of the future. I like!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This IS scary. I have a friend who this could easily happen to. I pray it never will. The poor souls in this world that have lives like that! Well done, and back to the top for you!!  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
|
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great poem, Bathory, although I would get away from the use of ALL CAPS...kinda hard on the eyes for some. Michael |
||
|
suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Dear Kristi You know I love you allot more than anything and I truly hope this doesnt happen to you ever as it would rip and shred me appart litteraly ------------------ life is short kill quick |
||
|
Midnight Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28 |
this iz really morbid...i like it! ------------------ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||